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Are sentences correct? Thank you! 1.While celebrating this festival, there are moon cakes which are regarded as indispensable/essential delicacies.Typical moon cakes are round pastries which are filled with red beans or yolk fillings that symbolize the full moon. 2.What I really like on this holiday was that I enjoyed eating barbecue with my relatives. For us, we spent quality time each other at this activity. Also, we had fun when we danced and sang around the grill. Thank you!!!

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How about; When celebrating this* festival, there are moon cakes which are regarded as indispensable delicacies. Typical moon cakes are round pastries, that symbolize the full moon and are filled with either red beans or egg yolk. * You can only use 'this' if you've already mentioned you are talking about Moon Festival. What I really enjoyed about this holiday was having a barbecue with my relatives. We got to spend a lot of quality time with each other and had fun dancing and singing around the grill.
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1.During the celebrations of this festival there are moon cakes which are regarded as requisite delicacies. Typical moon cakes are round pastries which are filled with red beans or yolk fillings that symbolize the full moon. 2. What I really like during this holiday is eating barbecue with my relatives. For us, this is an occasion to spent quality time with each other. Also, we have fun when we get the chance to dance and sing around the grill. Cheers

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