I just read a sentence of bible,and I want to imitate it to make a new one.
And He said to them, "Follow Me, and I will make you fishers of men."
Matthew 4:19 NASB

my sentence:obey me, and I will make you power of prosperity

if this have any wrong with grammar or logic,please fix it.XD

Question

I just read a sentence of bible,and I want to imitate it to make a new one.
And He said to them, "Follow Me, and I will make you fishers of men."
Matthew 4:19 NASB

my sentence:obey me, and I will make you power of prosperity

if this have any wrong with grammar or logic,please fix it.XD

Answer

"give you" rather than "make you" would be better. Also, "Obey me" sounds a little scary unless that's what you want. Follow me is better.
Follow me, and I will give you the power of prosperity.

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