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His fairy tales is not naive, and there are many philosophy of life. You must be get something if you read it though you are a adult。Mr.Zheng make his reader think about human, society and nature use his simple and imaginative words. He shows us a real world, he tells us the world has many bad things, although sometimes his words have a little extreme, but he really teaches us a lot of things:

Equality and self-confidence: Don’t compare with others at will, that will bother you.Everyone have good aspects, the parents should always encourage their children to develop their strengths, if so, everyone is genius.

Trueness and contentment: Never defiled by the social dirt. Don’t go after money, fame and gain. You should know the earth is a star for outer space, the richest man is a ant for the star. Insatiate person don’t know what is happy never.

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I have a English presentation.Please help me to correct it.Thank you very very much!!!This is the content:
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His fairy tales is not naive, and there are many philosophy of life. You must be get something if you read it though you are a adult。Mr.Zheng make his reader think about human, society and nature use his simple and imaginative words. He shows us a real world, he tells us the world has many bad things, although sometimes his words have a little extreme, but he really teaches us a lot of things:

Equality and self-confidence: Don’t compare with others at will, that will bother you.Everyone have good aspects, the parents should always encourage their children to develop their strengths, if so, everyone is genius.

Trueness and contentment: Never defiled by the social dirt. Don’t go after money, fame and gain. You should know the earth is a star for outer space, the richest man is a ant for the star. Insatiate person don’t know what is happy never.

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Never defiled by the social dirt. Don’t go after money, fame and gain. You should know the earth is a star for outer space, the richest man is a ant for the star. Insatiate person don’t know what is happy never. - never defile yourself! Do not seek money and fame only! You should know that the Earth is like a little star in the space and the richest man is an ant on this Earth. Insatiable person is not happy at all.

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Equality and self-confidence: Don’t compare with others at will, that will bother you.Everyone have good aspects, the parents should always encourage their children to develop their strengths, if so, everyone is genius. - 
Don’t compare yourself with others which is annoying. Everyone has good and bad qualities. Parents always have to encourage their children to develop their skills. But if every parent encouraged his child everyone would be genius.

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an adult - always use "an" before nouns beginning with vowel. he tells us the world has many bad things - he tells us that there are many bad things in the world.

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