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Today I and my partner will talk about a famous author.
He is “the king of fairy tales” ZhengYuanjie.
Mr.Zheng is a romancist! He was born in 1955.As a author, It is so amazing that he didn’t graduate from primary school. His highest diploma is the driver license. He can use about 500 Chinese characters practiced and he can do arithmetic with the calculator’s help.
Though Mr.Zheng didn’t have high diploma, but he has been written a magazine by himself 23 years from 1985.This magazine is 《The King Of Fairy Tales》.This magazine has been printed over 100 million books. It influences the Chinese children from generation to generation.
Mr.Zheng’s fairy tales is out of the common. There are no have prince and princess, no have beautiful castle and forest. It is Chinese children’s fairy tales. It is everybody’s too. His fairy tales is real and imaginative. The story is from our society and life, even sometimes you will think it isn’t a fairy tale, maybe you will think it is real life.
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Mr.Zheng is a romanticist! He was born in 1955.As a author, It is so amazing that he didn’t graduate from primary school. His highest diploma was a drivers license. He can use about 500 Chinese characters practiced and he can do arithmetic with the calculator’s help.
Though Mr.Zheng didn’t have high diploma, he has written a magazine by himself for the past 23 years first in 1985.This magazine is 《The King Of Fairy Tales》.This magazine has been printed over 100 million times. It influences generations of Chinese children.
Mr.Zheng’s fairy tales have the common touch. There are no prince and princess, no beautiful castles or forests. It is a Chinese children’s fairy tales and everybodys favourite. His fairy tales are real and imaginative. The storys are based on chinese society and life, maybe you will think the fairytales are a true account of real life.
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Today, My partner and I will talk about a famous author.
ZhengYuanjie, "the king of fairy tales".
Mr.Zheng was born in 1955 and lived his life as a romancist! As a author, It's amazing he didn’t graduate from primary school. The highest diploma he achieved was the driver license. He can use about 500 Chinese characters practiced, and can do arithmetic with the calculator’s help.
Though Mr. Zheng didn’t have a high diploma, he wrote a magazine by himself for 23 years since 1985. The magazine titled 《The King Of Fairy Tales》 has been in print for over 100 million books. It influences the Chinese children from generation to generation.
Mr.Zheng’s fairy tales is from the common life. There are no prince and princess, no beautiful castles and forests. It's a Chinese children’s fairy tale and also shared with adults. His fairy tales are real and imaginative. The stories are from our society and life, and even sometimes you will think it isn’t a fairy tale, but real life.
very rough edit i did, but i think you did a good job overall.
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