mini sagas
A mini saga is a story which must be told in exactly 50 words. Please help me to correct my story. I'm lack of words. Thank all.
A man came home lately from work. He didn't get changed, went straight to the dinner table, ate all the food there. With a full stomach, he aroused his wife sleeping on the couch. She looked at the table in panic and scream: "Gosh! The thief had eaten all our meal!"

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mini sagas
A mini saga is a story which must be told in exactly 50 words. Please help me to correct my story. I'm lack of words. Thank all. 
A man came home lately from work. He didn't get changed, went straight to the dinner table, ate all the food there. With a full stomach, he aroused his wife sleeping on the couch. She looked at the table in panic and scream: "Gosh! The thief had eaten all our meal!"

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A man came home late from work. He went straight to the dinner table and ate all the food there. With a full stomach, he aroused his wife who was sleeping on the couch. She looked at the table and screamed: "Oh no! The neighbor's dog has eaten our meal!"

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