I need someone help me to translate this text from English to Spanish
Original Version:

Drowning I'm drowning in that clown's mask
To make you laugh at my thousand flaws
Alone when I'm all alone I take my smile off
But your heartless words have left me scars

My translate:

Estoy ahogándome, estoy ahogándome en esta máscara de payaso
Para que te rías de mis miles de defectos
Solo, cuando estoy solo me quito la sonrisa
Pero tus palabras sin corazón han dejado en mí cicatrices

It's my translate right?

Thank you.

Question

I need someone help me to translate this text from English to Spanish
Original Version:

Drowning I'm drowning in that clown's mask
To make you laugh at my thousand flaws
Alone when I'm all alone I take my smile off
But your heartless words have left me scars

My translate:

Estoy ahogándome, estoy ahogándome en esta máscara de payaso
Para que te rías de mis miles de defectos
Solo, cuando estoy solo me quito la sonrisa
Pero tus palabras sin corazón han dejado en mí cicatrices

It's my translate right?

Thank you.

Answer

Hi.... Maybe the last part would be better like this:  "Pero tus palabras sin corazón me han dejado cicatrices"

I hope this help you, although I'm a English learning.

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