Could you correct awkward statements?
The old married couple hated the church that they attended over 20 years since they felt that the pastor of the church forced them to leave the church.

They think that they sacrificed for the church by donating a lot of money, volunteering to build the church building, and organizing the Sunday school for children.

That is true that they put a lot of efforts, time, and money thinking that they were like Samuel in the Bible.

However, they must let their negative thoughts go since they talk about bad things about the church and feel sad and uncomfortable whenever they talk about the church and the pastor.

Question

Could you correct awkward statements?
The old married couple hated the church that they attended over 20 years since they felt that the pastor of the church forced them to leave the church.

They think that they sacrificed for the church by donating a lot of money, volunteering to build the church building, and organizing the Sunday school for children.

That is true that they put a lot of efforts, time, and money thinking that they were like Samuel in the Bible.

However, they must let their negative thoughts go since they talk about bad things about the church and feel sad and uncomfortable whenever they talk about the church and the pastor.

Answer

The old married couple hated the church that they *had* attended  *for* over 20 years as they felt that the pastor of the church forced them to leave it.

They feel that they made big sacrifices for the church by donating a lot of money, volunteering to build the church, and organizing the Sunday school for children.

It is true that they put a lot of efforts, time, and money into it.

However, they must let their negative thoughts go since they criticise the church and feel sad and uncomfortable whenever they talk about the church and the pastor.

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