Dear___, Today is a wonderful day because in the previous years it is like the same day that the world has received a present, a new life and an amazing person like you. Happy Birthday! (to you!)

Dear ___ , Today is a wonderful day, because it is the same day as the day the world received a present: a new life and an amazing person like you. Happy Birthday, ____! (I changed a lot of things, but it's just to make it better. It doesn't mean that all of your grammar is wrong! Good job!)

Thanks!

Dear ... What a wonderful day it is today. For today the world rejoice with you on this day , the beginning of another year in the life for an amazing person like you. Congratulations on your birthday, ... !

it's better to say "happy birthday".. I am not sure if "congratulation to you birthday" is right :/ don't use it.. just write --> what a wonderful day(or "today is a special day" ^^ ), a few years ago today the world received a present, amazing person like you, happy birthday :3