Any native english speakers, please help check and revise the stuff I wrote. Thanks.
Feeling accepted, loved and happy may be the best feeling in the world.

Happiness can be defined as peace, joy and freedom.

Jottings on August, 28, 2016--------https://www.italki.com/notebook/788747/entry/722696

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Any native english speakers, please help check and revise the stuff I wrote. Thanks.
Feeling accepted, loved and happy may be the best feeling in the world.

Happiness can be defined as peace, joy and freedom.

Jottings on August, 28, 2016--------https://www.italki.com/notebook/788747/entry/722696

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It looks perfect

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