Commercial English
Can someone help me with this letter? I'm having some difficulties with Business English so I'm trying to improve it writing commercial letters. Thank you

Dear X,
We are glad to confirm you our availability for your prestigious project.
The price list we sent you refers to the products that are currently available on the market. As your opening is in October, please note that the prices of our articles might change.
Here you are the commercial terms we reserve to you:
- 25% discount on the price list for all products except the yellow one.
Enclosed, please find our minimum resale price list. Let us know who will be the contact person for the point of sale in Italy.

Question

Commercial English
Can someone help me with this letter? I'm having some difficulties with Business English so I'm trying to improve it writing commercial letters. Thank you

Dear X,
We are glad to confirm you our availability for your prestigious project.
The price list we sent you refers to the products that are currently available on the market. As your opening is in October, please note that the prices of our articles might change.
Here you are the commercial terms we reserve to you:
- 25% discount on the price list for all products except the yellow one.
Enclosed, please find our minimum resale price list. Let us know who will be the contact person for the point of sale in Italy.

Answer

Good job! Just a couple of prepositions that are wrong.

We are glad to confirm  you our availability for your prestigious project.
The price list we sent you refers to the products that are currently available on the market. As your opening is in October, please note that the prices of our articles might change.
Here are the commercial terms we reserve   you:
- 25% discount on the price list for all products except the yellow one.
Enclosed, please find our minimum resale price list. Let us know who will be the contact person for the point of sale in Italy.

Answer

Dear X,
We are pleased that you selected us to be a vendor for your upcoming project.
The price list we sent to you refers to the products that are currently available on the market. As your opening is in October, please note that prices are subject to change.
Here are the commercial terms we are pleased to extend to you: ( I assume you have more than one to tell them since you used the plural (terms)
- 25% discount off list price for all products except the yellow one(s)? ( no period needed in a bulleted list)
 Please write with the name of the contact person for the point of sale in Italy

("Enclosed..." is antiquated. If you say this they'll think that you also use tyewriters) ;)

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