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Anyone can make this more understandable and polite. Please correct my grammar also. I will post this to my facebook timeline.. "Friends, relatives and facebook contacts, I wonder if you would mind helping me to raise funds for my education by contributing a $1 (45pesos) to $2 (90pesos) to each one of you. My classes start in AUGUST 2016. It is 5 months away, but I am running out of time. I badly need the money before "JUNE" because there's a certain annual financial requirement for the "FORM I-20", a document to process F1 student visa. Friends, I am reaching out to ask a LITTLE contribution for my expenses in education in NYC. Even if you choose to donate a dollar or $2 in each one of you. It can still meet my goal. There are 3 ways to help: 1. Donate (every little contribution counts) Or 2. Claim or purchase the digital painting (I lowered the price lately) Or 3. Share my online fundraiser on facebook I believe there's still a kind-hearted person in the world. Thank you so much!"Please also correct my grammar here "Note: I will end my fundraiser until I meet the goal 0Z,000 but I need this 0X,000 before JUNE for the Form I-20. (Include scholarships)"

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Dear friends and relatives on Facebook, Please help me to raise funds for my education by contributing $1 (45pesos) to $2 (90pesos). My classes start in August of 2016. I have to meet a financial requirement deadline by June for the "FORM I-20" document to process my F1 student visa. Friends, I am reaching out to you to ask for a small contribution to help pay my expenses for education in NYC. If all of you only donated a $1 or $2 - the price of a coffee - I could still meet my goal. I will end my fundraiser when I meet the goal of 0Z,000 but I need 0X,000 before June for the Form I-20. (Includes Sholarships.) There are 3 ways to help: 1. Donate (every little contribution counts) 2. Claim or purchase the digital painting (I lowered the price recently) 3. Share the word about this fundraiser here on facebook I believe there are still kind-hearted people in the world. Please help me, and thank you so much! Tyrone

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