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I have a good summer vacation, in my holiday my time be used to practice driving car, i am lucky to passed the lucky driving exam, so i am very excited and lucky . When i finished my driving lessons i am go outside with my friends to have dinner together and go picnic
In this vacation i make several foreign friends, so when i have free time, i often chat with my foreign friends to practice my oral English ability and learning about other countries culture as well as i enjoy this kind of communication . Recently, i am go traveling with my parents, we went to a water park and climbing the mountain, i enjoy that nature breath, i am relax too, in my summer holiday, in order to exercise, i go swimming with my friends everyday and swimming pool is near my home, that is very convenient . A part of time i also to do volunteer in gerocomium to help the old man do arts and crafts, i think that very interesting , meanwhile i also met a new friend when i do volunteer i am very happy

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i need someone help me correct my text
I have a good summer vacation, in my holiday my time be used to practice driving car, i am lucky to passed the lucky driving exam, so i am very excited and lucky . When i finished my driving lessons i am go outside with my friends to have dinner together and go picnic  
In this vacation i make several foreign friends, so when i have free time, i often chat with my foreign friends to practice my oral English ability and learning about other countries culture as well as i enjoy this kind of communication . Recently, i am go traveling with my parents, we went to a water park and climbing the mountain, i enjoy that nature breath, i am relax too, in my summer holiday, in order to exercise, i go swimming with my friends everyday and swimming pool is near my home, that is very convenient . A part of time i also to do volunteer in gerocomium to help the old man do arts and crafts, i  think that very interesting , meanwhile i also met a new friend when i do volunteer  i am very happy

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Queena, when you use the pronoun "I" , You always must do with capital letter. I let you an example.

I am go outside with my friends- correct way
i am go outside with my friends- wrong way

I hope it has been helpful

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I had a good summer vacation. During my holiday,I practised driving and was lucky to pass driving exam. So now I am very excited and happy. When i finished my driving lessons, I went outside with my friends to have dinner together and have a picnic. 
During this vacation I made several foreign friends. When I have free time, I often chat with them to improve my oral English ability and learn about other countries cultures and I also enjoy this kind of communication. Recently, I went traveling with my parents. We went to a water park and climbed a mountain. I really enjoy the fresh air and I find it relaxing too. During my summer holiday, in order to exercise, I go swimming with my friends everyday and the swimming pool is near my home which is very convenient . Sometimes, I also do volunteer work in the old-age home to help an older man do arts and crafts which I find very interesting and fulfilling. At the same time, I have also made a new friend while volunteering, so I am very happy.

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I had a good summer vacation.During my vacation I used my time to practice driving. I am lucky I passed my driving exam. I was very excited to pass my exam. After the exam I went out to dinner with my friends on a picnic.

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