could you please check this sentence current or not?
Seniors who has the qualifications to live in Sun City Center must be over 55 years old. This rule could prevent the possibility of investors occupied resources and protect the rights of older people.Is it possible to use active voice here?

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could you please check this sentence current or not?
Seniors who has the qualifications to live in Sun City Center must be over 55 years old. This rule could prevent the possibility of investors occupied resources and protect the rights of older people.Is it possible to use active voice here?

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I'd write it like this:

Seniors who qualify to live in the Sun City Center must be over 55 years old. This rule could prevent the possibility of investors occupying resources and thus protect the rights of older people.

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I see no error in that sentence and English is my first language.

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There is just one mistake that you wrote ''seniors who has...' you should have written ' seniors who have ..

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