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My English line A lonely man There were so many tears in his eyes I wiped them easily and said "No need to cry" He turned around to the sky He wished he could just run away and fly No one is cared in the world Your rage is in inside No one is safe without sword We're kinda deaf and blind. He wanted back but doors were closed No one could hear his pleads He felt as if he's deep in frost But pain was strongly deep One day he died, relieved his soul No need to bear the pain He used to be a happy man Who'll never come again... Please don't judge so strictly, I have a pretty bad mood so I wrote this.. Don't know why, just had an inspiration. Please write what you think about it..Thank you..

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Марина, I liked it very much:) I can't correct anything since your English is better than mine. But I liked the plot, it looks accomplished and a reader could be satisfied. Espesially I liked the final chord "He used to be a happy man, Who'll never come again..." - sometimes it's really true, unfortunatelly... Best wishes

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