Is there any mistake in this paragraph?
I was really sad before my senior 1 since I was still a primary school student, because I found that my life can’t be eternal. What I love and who love me will disappear one day, and I have no way to keep them even myself. I like thinking, and always think too much. I spent
many years thinking about life. I am sentimental but also rational. I love exploring the essence of the fantastic world. I hate being cheated by the fake appearance and stupid thought.

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Is there any mistake in this paragraph?
I was really sad before my senior 1 since I was still a primary school student, because I found that my life can’t be eternal. What I love and who love me will disappear one day, and I have no way to keep them even myself. I like thinking, and always think too much. I spent   
many years thinking about life. I am sentimental but also rational. I love exploring the essence of the fantastic world. I hate being cheated by the fake appearance and stupid thought.

Answer

Hello! I'm no English expert but can gladly help you.
Are you trying to say senior 1? Or sad before my senior, 1 since I was still a primary school student? There are some spelling corrections to be made and maybe some run on sentences, but other than that good job! :)

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