Is there any problem with following words as one part of a certificate? I will be very grateful~
1. This is to certify that..., female, born on 24th February 1997, studied at ... from September 2012, now has completed all courses of High school. Her academic transcripts are as follow:
2.Total points
3.Senior 1 1st Term
4.Class No. 4
5.Annotation： Grading system in our school：In Senior 1 1st term, the maximum score for all the subjects is 100. In Senior 1 2nd term, the maximum score for Chinese, English, Maths is 120, that for the others is 100. In Senior 2, the maximum score for Chinese, English, Maths is 150, that for the others is 100. In Senior 3 1st term, the maximum score for Chinese, English, Maths is 150, that for Physics is 110, that for Chemistry is 100, that for Biology is 90. (Students were separated into Liberal Arts and Science classes in Senior 1 2nd term, so there is no Liberal Arts academic achievements.)

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Slight re-wording here for you:

1. This is to certify that..., female, born on 24th February 1997, studied at ... from September 2012, has now completed all  High school courses. Her academic transcripts are as follow:
2.Total points
3.Senior 1 1st Term
4.Class No. 4
5.Annotation： Grading system in our school：In Senior 1 1st term, the maximum score for all the subjects is 100. In Senior 1 2nd term, the maximum score for Chinese, English, Maths is 120, that for the others is 100. In Senior 2, the maximum score for Chinese, English, Maths is 150, and for the others is 100. In Senior 3 1st term, the maximum score for Chinese, English, Maths is 150, and for Physics is 110, for Chemistry is 100 and for Biology is 90. (Students were separated into Liberal Arts and Science classes in Senior 1 2nd term, so there is no Liberal Arts academic achievements.)

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