Please someone could correct me ??
I completed my training periods in the company "La Grande Récré", a toy store located in cannes la bocca.
During my training period my two principals tasks were to advise and help the customers, and to change the deparment displays.
Firstly, I had to learn more about the products to help and advise customers and lead them to the right products.
I constantly had to advise the customers, especially during the christmas period because it's the period when there is the biggest number of customers in the toystore, the company (and all the toystores) does more than 60% of its annual turnover during this period. So it's very important for the company to keep a good customer service and welcome them.
Also, I was in charge of unpacking the new deliveries each friday and to beep the products and put price tag and put products down on the shelf

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Please someone could correct me ??
I completed my training periods in the company "La Grande Récré", a toy store located in cannes la bocca. 
During  my training period my  two principals tasks were to advise and help the customers, and to change the deparment displays.
Firstly, I had to learn more about the products to help and advise customers and lead them  to the right products.
I constantly had to advise the customers, especially during the christmas period because it's the period when there is the biggest number of customers in the toystore, the company (and all the toystores) does more than 60% of its annual turnover during  this period. So it's very important for the company to keep a good customer service and welcome them.
Also, I was in charge of unpacking the new deliveries each friday and to beep the products and put price tag and put products down on the shelf

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Hello! Please copy and paste what you wrote in your "Notebook". That way, all corrections can explained to you. We can use the mark-ups every time we edit so you can track all the changes. ;) Allons-y!

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I completed my training period in the company "La Grande Récré", a toy store located in Cannes la Bocca. 
During my training period my two main tasks were to advise and help the customers, and to change the deparment displays.
Firstly, I had to learn more about the products to help and advise customers and lead them to the right choice.
I constantly had to advise the customers, especially during the Christmas season because it's the time when the store has its biggest number of customers. The company (and all its toystores), makes more than 60% of its annual turnover during this period. So it's very important for the company to keep a good customer service.
Also, I was in charge of unpacking the new deliveries every Friday, to check the products and put price tags on them and finally, put the products on display on the shelves.

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