Please check a grammatical mistake :)
Please check a grammatical mistake
and suggestion(change,modify) these sentence more easy&useful.

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1.Retro style is redefined & reworked for the modern age.
This story has a delicateness to it, Dreamy, gentle and full of romance,

2.This theme combines a pastel tones surface
with the floral for a charming collection of vintage-inspired loungewear.
Botanical, palsy, floral prints are reveal the brush strokes
to give watercolor & painterly prints a natural feel.

3.A beautiful Modernity of detail, this story is a romantic whirlwind of geometric patterns, sensational color and unusual fabric mixes.

4.Pioneering surface effect,
it is reinterpreted in a contemporary context, either in black and white,
or in pumped-up primary colors.
Abstract prints bring a surreal feel to this theme.

Question

Please check a grammatical mistake :)
Please check a grammatical mistake 
and suggestion(change,modify) these sentence more easy&useful.

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1.Retro style is redefined & reworked for the modern age.
This story has a delicateness to it, Dreamy, gentle and full of romance,

2.This theme combines a pastel tones surface 
with the floral for a charming collection of vintage-inspired loungewear.
Botanical, palsy, floral prints are reveal the brush strokes 
to give watercolor & painterly prints a natural feel.

3.A beautiful Modernity of detail, this story is a romantic whirlwind of geometric patterns, sensational color and unusual fabric mixes.

4.Pioneering surface effect, 
it is reinterpreted in a contemporary context, either in black and white, 
or in pumped-up primary colors.
Abstract prints bring a surreal feel to this theme.

Answer

1.Retro style is redefined & reworked for the modern age.
This story has a delicateness to it, Dreamy, gentle and full of romance,

2.This theme combines pastel tone surface's
with floral for a charming collection of vintage-inspired loungewear.
Botanical, palsy, floral prints reveal the brush strokes 
which give watercolor & painterly prints a natural feel.

3.A beautiful Modernity of detail, this story is a romantic whirlwind of geometric patterns, sensational color and unusual fabric mixes.

4.Pioneering surface effect, 
it is reinterpreted in a contemporary context, either in black and white, 
or in pumped-up primary colors.
Abstract prints bring a surreal feel to this theme.

i made some corrections and re-worded it to make it more natural. just copy my version :)

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