Please correct the sentences below?
Dear Ms Caufield
I'd like to inform you, that my visa was approved. I'll come to Myrtle Beach on May 25 and I'll get to the store for discussing my timetable and paper work on May 26. I'm enclosing my job offer to the letter.
Best wishes,
Maria Nechaeva
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I'm not a native speaker but I've noticed few mistakes in your writing. Firstly " for " should change to "to" and the word after should become discuss. Secondly, the last sentance should convert to present perfect, so it's " I've enclosed"
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We only need to change two prepositions,, adjust a verb, and we should remove the comma after "inform you" since you are continuing the same sentence.
Replace "get to the store for discussing" with "get to the store to discuss"
Replace "my job offer to the letter" with "my job offer to this letter."
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