Could you please check my text introdution for my personal website?
I have written so:
At the timeline section, I introduce the experiences and courses that I have had. They're divided in three categories experience, academic and certificate. Experience in red circle, academic in green circle and certificate in yellow circle. At the main technologies section, I introduce the main tecnologies, they range from 1 to 5. The more value, more the reliability degree with the technology it is. At the languages section, I introduce the languages that I speak. On the x-axis has the languages and on the y-axis has the languages level. The language level is divided in unknown, basic, intermediate, advance and fluent or native.
Is it correct? Would you have any advices for improving it?
Thanks in advance.
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I would suggest making some changes:
(In) the timeline section, I introduce the experiences and courses that I have had. They're divided (into) three categories: experience, academic and certificate. Experience (is in the) red circle, academic in (the) green circle and certificate in (the) yellow circle. (In) the main technologies section, I introduce the main technologies, (which) range from 1 to 5. The more value, (the) more the reliabie it is. (In) the languages section, I introduce the languages that I speak. (The x-axis represents the languages and the y-axis represents the level of each language.) The language level is divided (into) unknown, basic, intermediate, advance and fluent or native.
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