My Daily Work!
Hi. I'm Tu. My fullname is Anh Tu Mac. I'm 22 years old. I'm a student at Ha Noi University of Mining and Geology. The following is my daily work. The first, I usually get up at 6.15am and I go to bathroom, then I brush teeth and wash my face. After that, I get up my younger brother and then I have breakfast with him.
The second, I take my younger brother go to school at 7.00am and I back home.
The third, I do homework, do housework, listen to music, watch TV and take shower. Next, I get dressed and I have Lunch at 11.00am. After that, I usually go to University by motobike and meet friends at 13.00pm.
Finally, I back home at 17.00pm. I often cook with my mother and then I have dinner with family between from 19.00pm to 20.00pm. We talk to each other about learn, work..etc. Before, I often run in local park and play soccer with my friends at 17.45pm. Moreover, I sometimes go out with my friends to the Coffe, Business center on the holidays.
Do you can correct me, Please? :) Thanks

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My Daily Work!
Hi. I'm Tu. My fullname is Anh Tu Mac. I'm 22 years old. I'm a student at Ha Noi University of Mining and Geology. The following is my daily work. The first, I usually get up at 6.15am and I go to bathroom, then I brush teeth and wash my face. After that, I get up my younger brother and then I have breakfast with him.
The second, I take my younger brother go to school at 7.00am and I back home. 
The third, I do homework, do housework, listen to music, watch TV and take shower. Next, I get dressed and I have Lunch at 11.00am. After that, I usually go to University by motobike and meet friends at 13.00pm. 
Finally, I back home at 17.00pm. I often cook with my mother and then I have dinner with family between from 19.00pm to 20.00pm. We talk to each other about learn, work..etc. Before, I often run in local park and play soccer with my friends at 17.45pm. Moreover, I sometimes go out with my friends to the Coffe, Business center on the holidays.
Do you can correct me, Please? :) Thanks

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Hi. I'm Tu. My full name is Anh Tu Mac. I'm 22 years old. I'm a student at Ha Noi University of Mining and Geology. The following is my daily work. first, I usually get up at 6.15 a.m. and I go to the bathroom, then I brush my teeth and wash my face. After that, I wake up my younger brother and then I have breakfast with him.
secondly, I take my younger brother to school at 7 a.m and I come back home.
thirdly, I do my homework and the housework, listening to music, watching TV and take a shower. Next, I get dressed and I have Lunch at 11 a.m.. After that, I usually go to University by motobike and meet friends at 13 p.m.
last, I come back home at 17 p.m. I often cook with my mother and then I have dinner with family from 19 p.m. to 20 p.m. We talk to each other about learning, work..etc. I often run in local park and play soccer with my friends at 17.45 p.m. Moreover, I sometimes go out with my friends to the Coffee shop, Business center on the weekends
can you correct me, Please? :) Thanks

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