Would you like to let me know more natural expression?
This was my conversation with my Kiwi friends.

Last night, I went to bush with my friends, since one of my friends persuaded me to see glowworm.

Even though the time was already passed 8PM, I followed her.

we went up to the top of a hill, but I could never see cute glowworm....

I was completely taken in ----------?? is there any other natural expression?

I just carried her bags and camera holder...

but....that was not that much bad.

we could see beautiful moon and sky together.

Question

Would you like to let me know more natural expression?
This was my conversation with my Kiwi friends.

Last night, I went to bush with my friends, since one of my friends persuaded me to see glowworm.

Even though the time was already passed 8PM, I followed her.

we went up to the top of a hill, but I could never see cute glowworm....

I was completely taken in ----------?? is there any other natural expression?

I just carried her bags and camera holder...

but....that was not that much bad.

we could see beautiful moon and sky together.

Answer

It's very hard to give you advice, because we don't know if your friend was deceiving you or not. "Taken in" implies she was tricking you into carrying her camera equipment, and that she knew there were no glow-worms.

You could post this text in Notepad for better corrections.

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