There were a few mistakes in the 3 parts but it was mostly understandable. It did sound a bit strange that all the women in the family on the one hand weren't encouraged to seek education and mostly planned on getting married and not much else - but in the next part they're disappointed because you won't follow the family legacy of being an engineer, despite the fact that I thought the family legacy was getting married and skipping education entirely?

Part 3: employees in my small city because of the recruiting conditions in the city and if there was a vacancy the company would prefer to recruit a man. Despite this I didn't lose hope and insisted on being proactive ,so my colleague and I setup our own company entitled "OK". At first we began working as freelancers on a small scale. We then started to expand our work and to invest in customers, by providing free courses on programming to anyone that may be interested. After a while we divided the responsibilities and I became the Executive manager . The company's mission is creating a new programming environment that inspires the programmers to come up with creative and new ideas and creating a new generation of programmers by recruiting kids who are talented in coding. In addition, the company's vision is that after 5 years we will be able to start a revolution on programming and to create a new O.S.(first Egyptian computer operating system) and platform for programmers. By getting the MBA scholarship I will be able to run the company efficiently and reach my goals ,contribute effectively in my society and help others by making their dreams come true.

Part 2: Then I realized the fact that I grew up in a conservative society in a small city away from the capital meant thinking outside the box was shameful thought. There aren't any woman in my family who have their own career. Their goal is to get married after graduation. They consider their education a luxury that enhances their chances of getting married. However I hold a different perspective on working women and also believe in empowering women. I gained this different perspective from reading books, which opened new horizons in my mind. Moreover I struggled to do what I believed in. Not only were the books my passion but also computer software .I read a lot about how the software industry is so crucial and I was so inspired by Bill Gates ,the owner of Microsoft and who invented "Windows" the computer operating system, that after finishing high school with a high score I decided to join the Computer Science and Information faculty although that decision went against my parent's desire to join the Engineering faculty as it was my family legacy to be an engineer ,but I resisted and insisted on my decision . After graduation and due to the economic and political circumstances that happened in Egypt at that time I found a job as a secretary and data entry worker in an office with some difficulty. I accepted the job but I never forgot my dream to own my own Software and IT Solutions company. After one year I quit and started to seek a job in the IT field. But there wasn't any company recruiting new

Part 1: When I was 12 years old I used to play an interesting game with my friends in which everyone chose their dream job and started to act as they had got the job. All of my friends stared to play the roles of doctors, teachers and engineers. I was the only one who played the role of a manager with my own business to run. Two years later, I noticed that I had huge amount of magazines for kids. I read all those magazines and had no need for them anymore .Then I came up with an idea to sell all those magazines to other kids with a discount so they could get the benefit of reading the magazines and I would earn some money. Unfortunately the idea faced great objections from my parents who said that I am a girl and still young, who shouldn’t do that or even think that way.

Third part employers in my small city because of the adverts condition in the city and if there was a vacancy job the company prefers recruiting a male. However I didn't lose hope and insisted to beinitiative ,so with my colleague we setup our company entitled "OK". First we began as freelancers in a small scale,Then we started to expand our work and to invest in humans, that fore we provided free courses on programming to anyone may be interested. After while we dived the responsibilities and I became the Executive manager . The company's mission is creating a new programming environment that inspires the programmers to come up with creative and new ideas and creating new programmer generation by adapting kids who are talent in coding. In addition, the company's Vision after 5 years the company will be able to make a revolution on programming and to create a new O.S.(first Egyptian computer operating system) and platform for programmers. Thus, by getting the MBA scholarship I will be able to run the company efficiently so I can reach my goals ,contribute effectively in my society and help others by making their dreams come true.