I have to write my daily routine in present tense, please kindly correct my grammar .
I usually wake up at six sharp and then i have a shower. I go to campus thirty minutes before my first class starts. Usually, I go to campus with my friend by motorcycle, She picks me up at my boarding house and we have breakfast together. We take about ten minutes for breakfast, and then we go to campus. We have some classes, and after classes are finish, we have lunch. After that she driving me to my boarding house. When I arrive, i have a shower and take a nap for few hours. When i wake up,I read some textbooks and some notes which has been written by me, i read for about 2 hours. After that, i go to buy some food for my dinner. Thereafter, I go to my boarding house, and i open my laptop browsing some news besides chatting with somefriends. Finally, at about ten, i brush my teeth and washing my face, and then i go to bed.

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I have to write my daily routine in present tense, please kindly correct my grammar .
I usually wake up at six sharp and then i have a shower. I go to campus thirty minutes before my first class starts. Usually, I go to campus with my friend by motorcycle, She picks me up at my boarding house and we have breakfast together. We take about ten minutes for breakfast, and then we go to campus. We have some classes, and after classes are finish, we have lunch. After that she driving me to my boarding house. When I arrive,  i have a shower and take a nap for few hours. When i wake up,I read some textbooks and some notes which has been written by me, i read for about 2 hours. After that, i go to buy some food for my dinner. Thereafter, I go to my boarding house, and i open my laptop browsing some news besides chatting with somefriends. Finally, at about ten, i brush my teeth and washing my face, and then i go to bed.

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I usually wake up at six sharp and then i have a shower. I LEAVE FOR campus thirty minutes before my first class. Usually, I go with my friend by motorcycle, She picks me up at my boarding house and we have breakfast together. We take about ten minutes for breakfast, and then LEAVE. We have some classes, and WHEN THEY FINISH we have lunch. AfterWARDS MY FRIEND DRIVES me BACK HOME. When I GET BACK, I have a shower and take a nap for A few hours. When I wake up, I read some textbooks and MY notes. I read for about 2 hours. After that, I go to buy some food for my dinner. THEN I go BACK HOME, and browSE THE NEWS ON MY LAPTOP WHILE chatting with some friends. Finally, at about ten I brush my teeth and WASH my face, and then I go to bed.

One thing. I on its own is always written as a capital letter, and never as i.

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The only incorrect tense I noted was in this sentence: After that she driving me to my boarding house

You should use "drives" instead of "driving".

I also note that while you usually capitalize "I" when beginning a sentence, you often do NOT at other times. This is incorrect. "I", the personal pronoun is always capitalized.

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