Please check that the paragraph is written in native English or awkward.
Paragraph:

I have a few options that I can take in December. First, when I find an internship, then I will stay more in Germany. I will focus on work rather than language. Second, if I cannot find an internship, then my language test on end of November decides the option. If I'm successful on my language test, I will concentrate on TestDaF preparation. If not, I will go back to Korea.

Please correct my composition.
Thank you.

Question

Please check that the paragraph is written in native English or awkward.
Paragraph:

I have a few options that I can take in December. First, when I find an internship, then I will stay more in Germany. I will focus on work rather than language. Second, if I cannot find an internship, then my language test on end of November decides the option. If I'm successful on my language test, I will concentrate on TestDaF preparation. If not, I will go back to Korea.

Please correct my composition.
Thank you.

Answer

I have a few options that I can take in December. First, after  I find an internship,  I will stay longer in Germany. I will focus on work rather than language. Second, if I cannot find an internship, then my language test  at the end of November will decide the option. If I'm successful on my language test, I will concentrate on TestDaF preparation. If not, I will go back to Korea.

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