Is the expression of the following simple sentence nice, and how to improve? Too many preposition?
The springback amount of H-bending is too small to measure, so it is not used to verify the reliability of the H-bending FE model.
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I'm not a chemist, but I wonder if you mean "H-bonding," not "H-bending." Bonds are links that tie one atom to another, and hydrogen bonds are an important kind of bonding. I wonder whether "FE" should be "Fe", the abbreviation for the iron atom.
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There is nothing really wrong with the sentence you give and there is nothing wrong with your use of prepositions. However, I expect an expert in H-bending would use another phrase than "springback amount of H-bending" --- it just sounds too long a phrase. It is simpler to say "to verify the H-bending FE model." than "to verify the reliability of the .... ".
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