Hi there Here is what I think and I have made some corrections for you :) I have put them in a rough order of 'amounts of money'. You don't need to put in got as it is fine without it but it is not incorrect to use it, just sounds more natural. Diomedez has tons of money. (it is incorrect say much) Yurleidy has hoards of money (it is incorrect to say very much) Jessy has loads of money. (you wouldn't use pretty). David has a lot of money. Robert has plenty of money. Walter has quite a lot of money. In terms of writing an essay you have several options to use. Mr Johns is a wealthy (or extremely/ very wealthy) man who became rich from oil. Wealth means everything to him. They live in an affluent neighborhood, and I hear they are very well-off /minted. One day I aim to be well-off/rich and live a lavish lifestyle. There are other options but these are a few Best wishes Gillian My question is who has got more amount of money? Is there any sentence sounds weird? Is there any word (quite,pretty,etc) in those sentences I must not use it in a essay? Can I use another word rather than "a lot" ? (apart from previous words) It's that I use it a lot. xD Thanks

Can I use another word rather than "a lot"? Yes you can use: plenty, very much, loads 'of fun', a ton of 'money', many, large amount, to many to count, I'm full of, up to here with, a gazzillion. But you need to know how to use these.