my writing about room share
Hi, If you are looking for a room, I can provide it. It is located in Yooseonggu, Daejeon nearby Chung-nam National University (10 minutes by walk), KAIST(10 minutes by bus) and Mokwon University (15 minutes by bus). There are also subway station(유성온천역) and bus station in 3 minutes distances by walk. I have two rooms for share in my new apartment and if you are two friends it would be good to live together. In front of the room there is clean bathroom only for you. Of course you can use free WiFi. You will be live with owners of house together. They are my parents. They will respect your private and be kind to you. If you have more questions please contact me and I can send you some pictures of the rooms.

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my writing about room share
Hi, If you are looking for a room, I can provide it. It is located in Yooseonggu, Daejeon nearby Chung-nam National University (10 minutes by walk), KAIST(10 minutes by bus) and Mokwon University (15 minutes by bus). There are also subway station(유성온천역) and bus station in 3 minutes distances by walk.  I have two rooms for share in my new apartment and if you are two friends it would be good to live together. In front of the room there is clean bathroom only for you. Of course you can use free WiFi. You will be live with owners of house together. They are my parents. They will respect your private and be kind to you. If you have more questions please contact me and I can send you some pictures of the rooms.

Plz check my writing~~~!!!

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Hello, for people who are looking for rooms to live in , here is my offer. It is located in Yooseonggu, Daejeon nearby Chung-nam National University (10 minutes by walk), KAIST(10 minutes by bus) and Mokwon University (15 minutes by bus). There are also subway station(유성온천역) and bus station ( 3 minutes walk). I have two available rooms in my new apartment and so if you are two friends it would be good to live together. In front of the room there is a clean bathroom provided only for you. And free Wi-Fi is provided too for your use. You will be living with the owners of the house who are my parents. They will respect your private and be kind to you. If you have more questions please contact me and I can send you some pictures of the rooms. 
(your first text is actually really good , everything is clear I just added some things … hope someone will apply for this offer 

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