My thesis project. Abstract. Please correct ))
Abstract

Thesis project on "Development of measures and selection of equipment for the prevention and elimination blowout on condensate fields with abnormally high reservoir pressures" made student gr. BS - 501Portnov D.A.

Keywords: gas, wells, pressure, accident, blowout preventer, drilling mud.

During execution of the graduation project examined the causes and development blowout on oilfields with abnormally high reservoir pressures. Was also performed an analysis of measures to detect and prevent the oil and gas blowout and calculating the pressure crimping equipment wellhead.

Question

My thesis project. Abstract. Please correct ))
Abstract

Thesis project on "Development of measures and selection of equipment for the prevention and elimination  blowout on condensate fields with abnormally high reservoir pressures" made student gr. BS - 501Portnov D.A.

Keywords: gas, wells, pressure, accident, blowout preventer, drilling mud.

During execution of the graduation project examined the causes and development blowout on oilfields with abnormally high reservoir pressures. Was also performed an analysis of measures to detect and prevent the oil and gas blowout and calculating the pressure crimping equipment wellhead.

Answer

The biggest repeated error is the order of the information in each sentence. You'll need to revise passive voice, and re-post the text here: http://www.italki.com/notebook

This Answers section isn't very well-suited for text correction.

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