Could you please correct
1. The revealed growth of the number and the volume of dump sites along the river Ardon and its tributaries and the activities of the stone crushing enterprises increase the turbidity of waters and narrow the beds of the rivers, disrupt normal life-sustaining activity of the ecosystems of these areas, and not strengthened banks are a special threat in case of the flood.
2. Indexes of background radiation of the surveyed territories in planning future radiometric studies don’t exceed the maximum permissible concentration and can be recommended as targets.

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Could you please correct
1. The revealed growth of the number and the volume of dump sites along the river Ardon and its tributaries and the activities of the stone crushing enterprises increase  the turbidity of waters  and narrow the beds of the rivers, disrupt normal life-sustaining activity of the ecosystems of these areas, and not strengthened banks are a special threat in case of the flood.
2. Indexes of background radiation of the surveyed territories in planning future radiometric studies don’t exceed the maximum permissible concentration and can be recommended as targets.

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1. The revealed growth of the number and volume of dump sites along the river Ardon and its tributaries and the activities of the stone crushing enterprises increase the turbidity of the water and narrow the river beds, disrupt the normal life-sustaining activity of the ecosystems of these areas, and unstrengthened banks are a special threat in case of flooding.

2 Doesn't make sense to me.  It may depend on the context, but:  (a) an index is not a concentration, (b) indexes ... in planning ... don't exceeed... just doesn't make sense.

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