Is this sentense ok?
The hands on the clock were frozen, a reminder of time slipping away, stopped at the precise moment when my grandfather had ceased winding it.
Is this sentense ok?
Maybe it need a conjunction？
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Answers · 2
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Your sentences are ok, your questions are not ^^
sentence is the correct word, not sentense :)
Maybe it NEEDS a conjunction? needs should be used.
it's OK to not use conjunctions here, because your sentence gives a somewhat poetic effect, and it sounds fine for me. :)
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It seems okay to me. I am an advanced English speaker, but not a native speaker though, so my judgment does not have to be correct.
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