Please correct my writing and give me advise how to combine to make it shorter . Thank you
I'm afraid I've made a mistake .if I did I want every one to know that it wasn't intentional . I'm from Ethiopia and my native language is called AMHARIC . I joined Italki.com yesterday . while feeling out the questioner , pulling down the language list , I clicked on AMHARIC . Once done , i posted my writing and and asked some one help to correct my entry . Surely, few minutes letter a nice girl corrected my post , gave me some valuable advice then asked me to answer her question as well . I believe the writing was (China or Corian. This is where all my confusion rises . 1st - does any one know if there is another language called( Amharic ) beside Ethiopian language ? 2nd please!!!!correct my writing on grammar and give me feed back on how to combine my sentences to make it shorter . Thanks in advance
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I'm afraid I've made a mistake .if I did I want everyone to know that it wasn't intentional . I'm from Ethiopia and my native language is called AMHARIC . I joined Italki.com yesterday . while filling in out the questioner (with feeling ) , pulling down the language list , I clicked on AMHARIC . Once done , I posted my writing and and asked some one help to correct my entry . Surely, few minutes later (I got a letter from ) a nice girl who corrected my post , gave me some valuable advice then asked me to answer her question as well . I believe the writing was (China or Korean. This is where all my confusion rises . 1st - does anyone know if there is another language called( Amharic ) beside Ethiopian language ? 2nd please!!!!correct my writing on grammar and give me feedback on how to combine my sentences to make it shorter . Thanks’ in advance
I think your English is very good, only a view errors which could be considered as typo’s!
As for Amharic, I don’t think thers is any other language using the Amharic script. Like Japanese and I think Korean, it is a syllable script combining consonant and vowel in one character.
Chines however doesn’t use a alphabet nor a syllable script, it uses a pictographic script, each character expressing a meaning, not a sound! Each character dough is pronounce with one syllable. I love languages, in Japanese would be: 私は言語が大好きですWatashi wa gengo ga daisuki desu. In Chinese: 我喜欢语言。wǒ xǐ huān yǔ yán. In Arabic however it would be:أنا احب اللغات Ana uhibbu al-lughraat. Arabic use an alphabet like English, but in Arabic they only write the consonants and leave out the vowels, only long vowels are written down.
This is Amharic (ኣማርኛ) isn’t it?
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Hi, just want to help, so here's my answers:
[1] a PERIOD [.] should be done right after the last word of your sentence.
[2] "every" and "one" should be one word in only in your second sentence.
[3] Capital letters should be done after you have the punctuation mark period [.]
[4] Like the punctuation mark period [.] the comma [,] should also be typed right after the last word of your phrase.
[5] 'some' and 'one' should be one word also.
[6] Writing was "Mandarin" or Chinese", to express their language.
According to the history of your Country, there are approxximately 90+ languages spoken in Ethiopia, and one of those is the Amharic, which came from Ge'ez. And according to the census Amharic is the most used language, which is one of the reason why it became the official language of Ethiopia.
Maybe you can omit the part where you detailed the clicking things in italki, for your concerns were about how you meet this nice girl and about your language.
But to sum it all, I don't think you need to shorten your sentences, as it stated very clear what you really want to say.
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