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I would like to talk about my sister, her name is Marina and she is 32 years old. She is quite tall and fairly thin. She is a brunette and her hair is straight and short, she never dyes her hair. She has an oval face with a small nose and tanned skin, she has a bright black eyes. He has a beautiful smile and perfect teeth. She doesn´t like wearing make-up, and I think she doesn´t really need it. She is very beautiful.
I admire his personality because she has a lot of good qualities, for example, she is always happy and makes you also be happy. She is funny, too; she is always making me laugh, but sometimes her jokes don´t have sense. She is extrovert and friendly with everybody. She is a really polite and lovely person.
But she also has bad things, she gets angry very easily and she shouts a lot. Despite that, she needs very little for returns to be happy.
She is very special to me.
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I would like to talk about my sister, her name is Marina and she is 32 years old. She is quite tall and fairly thin. She is a brunette and her hair is straight and short, she never dyes her hair. She has an oval face with a small nose and tanned skin AND she has a bright black eyes. SHe has a beautiful smile and perfect teeth. She doesn´t like wearing make-up, and I DON'T think she really needS it. She is very beautiful.
I admire his personality because she has a lot of good qualities, for example, she is always happy and makes you also be happy. She is funny, too; she is always making me laugh, but sometimes her jokes don´t have sense. She is extrovert and friendly with everybody. She is a really polite and lovely person.
But she also has bad POINTS, she gets angry very easily and she shouts a lot. Despite that, she DOESN'T STAY ANGRY FOR LONG.
She is very special to me.
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I would like to talk about my sister, her name is Marina and she is 32 years old. She is quite tall and fairly thin. She is a brunette and her hair is straight and short, she never dyes her hair. She has an oval face with a small nose and tanned skin and she has bright black eyes. She has a beautiful smile and perfect teeth. She doesn´t like wearing make-up, and I don't think she needs it. She is very beautiful.
I admire her personality because she has a lot of good qualities, for example, she is always happy and makes you happy too. She is funny also; she is always making me laugh, but sometimes her jokes don´t make sense. She is extroverted and friendly with everybody. She is a really polite and lovely person.
But she also has her bad points, she gets angry very easily and she shouts a lot. Despite that, she soon returns to being happy.
She is very special to me.
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