is this right?
Hello everyone,
Just to remind you that our next meeting is Tuesday at 3:00pm, Student Center, room 225.
Also, as a volunteer project, some of us are going to the Frazee Dream Center to cook dinner for a group of kids on Monday, So if you want to come with us please let me know.
We will be there from 4:30 to5:30 or 6:00pm

Thank you

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is this right?
Hello everyone,
 Just to remind you that our next meeting is Tuesday at 3:00pm, Student Center, room 225.
Also, as a volunteer project, some of us are going to the Frazee  Dream Center to cook dinner for a group of kids on Monday, So if you want to come with us please let me know. 
We will be there from 4:30  to5:30 or 6:00pm

Thank you

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Just a few changes...

"Hello everyone,
Just to remind you that our next meeting is on Tuesday at 3:00pm, at the Student Center, room 225.

Also, as a volunteer project, some of us are going to the Frazee Dream Center to cook dinner for a group of kids on Monday. So if you want to come with us please let me know.

We will be there from 4:30 to 5:30 or 6:00pm.

Thank you
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Very good. Everything looks perfect.

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