Complaint Letter
Hey, guys could you help me with this letter? I'm having an issue with a purchase I made and I have to email them. What do you think?
Dear Stitch and Craft,
Nearly a month ago I ordered a Tilda Corner Shop Material Kit Ice Skating Angel, and it turned out it was out of stock. I thought my order had been cancelled, but a couple of days ago my credit card was charged and I did not receive any email confirming my purchase. Furthermore, I have been trying to access my stitch craft account without success. The problem is that when I enter my password nothing happens, I have even tried to send it to my email, but I have not received any response yet. To solve the problem I would appreciate if you could send me an email confirming if my order has already been dispatched and fix my account issue. I am looking forward to hearing from you shortly.
Sincerely
Isadora
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I suggest a couple of tiny adjustments. (i) Make " .. nothing happens." the end of a sentence, and "I have even .. " should be the beginning of the next sentence. (ii) " .. I would appreciate it if you .. "
Otherwise, it's a very good composition.
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