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Colombia flagCristian CO
THIS TEXT IS OK? First: the changing family emphasized. His biological mother, a mother student, decided to offer it up for adoption so that another family will provide a better quality of life and he left for college. 17 years later, he went to college, but later he decided to leave school, not wanting to spend the money from their parents. He preferred to trust that things went well, without going to college. Only went to school he preferred. After this decision Apple is born in the garage of his home. He hit his success, with all past events.

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Short answer: No. There are multiple errors in most sentences. I suggest you post it as a Notebook entry for people to correct.
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As Gary says, it is distinctly NOT OK, many errors of pronouns, verb tense, consistency.

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