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I think, 10 class will be more hard and responsible. That is why i worried about my marks. But at the same time, i can will get more knowledge and will be more smart. I can will take part in any competitions, and maybe i will win. I expectation, that i will do it. I hope this year will be have many good and funny days. I think, every weekends i and my friends will go to any intresting places and never will boring. I think i will meet new good boys and girls and we will become friends. But i afraid, that i will quarrel with them or with teachers. It is will be unpleasantly. But i hope, then all will be ok. I want to speak in English very well, and i will try do it, but at the same time i worries that this will be difficult for me. If i will speak in English not so bad like now, i want choose this exams, because i think, that english language need every man. I hope,that this year will be better,than last year.

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Please correct the errors
I think, 10 class will be more hard and responsible. That is why i worried about my marks. But at the same time, i can will get more knowledge and will be more smart. I can will take part in any competitions, and maybe i will win. I expectation, that i will do it. I hope this year will be have many good and funny days. I think, every weekends i and my friends will go to any intresting places and  never will boring.  I think i will meet new good boys and girls and we will become friends. But i afraid, that i will quarrel with them or with teachers. It is will be unpleasantly.  But i hope, then all will be ok. I want to speak in English very well, and i will try do it, but at the same time i worries that this will be difficult for me. If i will speak in English not so bad like now, i want choose this exams, because i think, that english language need every man. I hope,that this year will be better,than last year.

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I think that the  Year 10 class will be harder and  more demanding. That is why  I'm worried about my marks. But at the same time, I will become more knowledgeable and smarter. I will take part in any competitions and maybe I will win. 
I expect that  I will do so. I hope that this year  I will have many good and funny days.  Every weekend my friends and I  will go to interesting places and  it will never be boring.
 I think  that I will meet new good boys and girls and we will become friends, but I am also afraid that I might  quarrel with them,  or with  the teachers. 
That would be unpleasant. I  hope that  everything will be ok.
 I want to speak in English very well, and I  will try do so, but at the same time I  worry that it will be difficult for me. 
If I speak English not so badly,  like I do  now,  I  want to  choose  to do these exams, because I think that the  English language  is necessary for everyone
 I hope that this year will be better than last year.

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I think, 10th class will be harder and more responsible. That is why I worried about my marks . But at the same time, I can get more knowledge and be more smart. I can take part in any competitions, and maybe I will win. I expect, that I will do it. I hope this year will be  many good and funny days. I think, every weekends me and my friends will go to any kind of interesting places and will never be bored. I think I will meet new good boys and girls and we will become friends. But I am afraid, that I will quarrel with them or with teachers. It  will be unpleasant. But I hope, everything will be ok. I want to speak  English very well, and I will try to do it, but at the same time I am worried that this will be difficult for me. If I will speak  English not as  bad as now, I want to choose these exams, because I think, that English language is  needed for every person. I hope,that this year will be better,than last.

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Hi, next time post your text in Notebook so that you can see the corrections in colour.
 You can learn English using the Russian language here at Italki:

http://www.italki.com/knowledge/Learn-english-russian.htm

Here are English teachers/community tutors who speak Russian at Italki:

http://www.italki.com/teachers/1-3-English-Russian0-999999-0-0-1.htm

You can find an English language partner who speaks Russian. Send them a message and ask them to be a friend, then you can arrange to talk on skype or msn Take into account the time differences between countries.

http://www.italki.com/partners/1-Russian-English200-0--0-0.htm

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That is how I see it could be. ( I am not native, so maybe there will be better answers). 
btw I - я, is always cappital letter

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