is there any mistake in this ?
Hello everybody I am Mohamed. I am 17 years old. and I am from Egypt. I hope to have a lot of pen-friends from any country I don't have any problem with any one, with any country or with any religion I'm very tolerant and I hope all be like that with me .
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Mohamed,
This is very good. Most of the mistakes are just punctuation mistakes. I have corrected it below. Let me know if you have any questions.
"Hello everybody. I am Mohamed. I am 17 years and I am from Egypt. I hope to have a lot of pen-pals from any country. I don't have any problem with any one, with any country or with any religion. I'm very tolerant and I hope everyone will be like that with me."
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It's best to post writing samples under the "Notebook" tab where there are editing tools to correct them.
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you are welcome! i'm also new to italki.
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