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can u correct this text please? The history of a Sheepskin Coat There was a Sheepskin Coat (pelt). Simple Sheepskin Coat, even not very new, though not patched, and is decently passing (frayed), sodden (impregnated) smell of human sweat, its decorative trimmings had long since faded that once gave him a character typical Pokuttia (historical and geographical region of Ukraine) Sheepskin Coat. In short, now it was the Sheepskin Coat regular, everyday, unsightly not interesting for amateur ethnographer and at the glimpse without any right to be proud. Yet he was very proud and in conversations with himself, who led the course and the darkness, hanging on clothes-peg over the host’s bed it (he) swaggers and wears out unusual. "What is he, - he thought – which Sheepskin Coat, which fur, which church’s oparat (priest’s dress) has more right to dignity and respect from me? However, lysam, cloth covered with pomegranate, and more to bow and scrape and show humility before church’s oparat is dued, but that doesn’t mean anything! All about the human eye! For speaking the truth, what are their merits? it is just that one on one more cost. Can they compare with me, simple, poor Sheepskin Coat, that his(it) natural warmth heats whole family?

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[I deleted words when I couldn't figure out the meaning. I also put "sheepskin coat" in lower case instead of capitalizing. You may have capitalized them for literary reasons.] There was a sheepskin coat. A simple sheepskin coat, not very new, but not patched, somewhat frayed, and impregnated with the smell of human sweat. Its decorative trimmings had long since faded that once gave him ["it" is better, unless you're foreshadowing its personification later] the character of a typical Pokuttia sheepskin coat. In short, it was a regular, everyday, unsightly sheepskin coat; not interesting for an amateur ethnographer, and at first glance, without any right to be proud. Yet he was very proud. In conversations with himself, in the darkness, hanging on clothes-peg over the host’s bed, he boasted, "Who is it," he thought, "which sheepskin coat, which fur, which priest’s vestment has more right to dignity and respect than I? "However, we bow and scrape and show humility before a chasuble [a fancy vestment], but that doesn’t mean anything! It's all about the human eye! For in truth, what are their merits? One coat just costs more than the other. "Can they compare with me, a simple, poor sheepskin coat, whose natural warmth can heat a whole family?"

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