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New Year's Eve In Iran
While you travel during new year's eve you are killing two birds with one stone by making yourself and others happy. When our relatives are far from us we can travel to them and make them happy by our visit. A common action in iran during new year's eve vacation is that most families are waiting with anticipation as they ready themselves for their reletives to arrive to bring on the good times. Good times, however cannot be accomplished is we had stayed at home watching tv and such therefore losing our moral anchorage
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New Year's Eve In Iran
While you travel during new year's eve you are killing two birds with one stone by making yourself and others happy. When our relatives are far from us we can travel to see them and make them happy by our visit. A common scene in iran during new year's eve vacation is that most families are waiting with anticipation as they prepare for their relatives to arrive to bring on the good times. Good times, however cannot be accomplished if we had stayed at home watching tv and such,
therefore losing our moral anchorage....(this is vague, and I don't know what you mean by this).
I changed a few words in your paragraph to help it out.
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