Can you have a look and correct mistakes if necessary
Can you have a look at the following letters and correct any mistakes, if necessary.
A formal letter:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in connection with your advertisement for Proficiency Photography course in England that I found in the Daily Telegraph from 23rd March 2012.
I would like to ask about the program of this course and an/the opportunity to receive a certificate for its completion.Can you send it to me?
I am interested in the size of groups and some required experience. Do I have to possess any previous experience in taking photographs? Do you intend to check it ( I mean experience) somehow in practice? I prefer learning in small groups because then I believe will make some progress.
I would like to know more details about the number of hours of classes during a/the day and the total duration of the course. How often do the lessons take place? How long does the course last?
I am still not sure about two things: What is the price of this course? Where do the lessons take place?
I look forward to your answer.
Yours faithfully,
A postcard:
Hi Susan,
I'm spending my holidays in the mountains in Austria.
I'm climbing the mountains and visiting many interesting places.
The weather is sunny, sometimes it rains.
I am planning to stay here for 10 days.
I am going to return to Paris little relaxed. After my arrival we can go out and go to the next any good place.
How about your holidays? I hope you're having a great time, too.
See you soon,
Thanks in advance for your help
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Corrections:
for the Proficiency Photography ....
Yours truly,
.. hoping to return to Paris more relaxed. After I get back, we can go out to someplace nice. You decide where we'll go, okay?
See you soon,
P.S. When I see you, tell me all about your vacation!
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Hi I suggest that you post this in Notebook where you'll be able to see all the corrections clearly in colour.
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