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Hi
Thank u for reply my message
I am Vacation. In my opinion everybody must go to travel. But I can’t cut my work office
Because I am financial manager and . Foreign Trade however I am happy that I can do works my offices and also enjoy from my Vacation.
Please tell me about that text is it ok ?.
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I am on vacation. In my opinion, everybody must travel. However, I can’t cut my office work, because I am financial manager in Foreign Trade. However, I am happy that I can work in my office and also enjoy my vacation.
Fairly good. I get the idea, but there are a few mistakes.
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Dear.....
Thank you for replying to my message
I am on vacation. In my opinion everybody should be able to travel. But I can’t leave my work because I am the financial manager and involved in foreign trade.
However I am happy that I can work from my office and also enjoy my vacation.
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hellow to all
today , when i came to italke and saw 4 message i got very happy because i received 4 reply my text that i put in italke last night and i study all of them and i hope that i hadn't mistake and i thank the ladies and gentlemen: kat and jura and siny adon and fdmaxey.
have good day.
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"I am Vacation. In my opinion everybody must go to travel. But I can’t cut my work office
Because I am financial manager and . Foreign Trade however I am happy that I can do works my offices and also enjoy from my Vacation."
REWRITE: I am on vacation. In my opinion, everybody should travel. But I must work during my vacation, because I am a finance manager in international trade. However, I am happy that I can do my office work and also enjoy my vacation.
"On vacation" is an idiom.
A: Where are you going?
B: I'm going on vacation. I'm going on a business trip.
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Hi
Thank you for replying to my message
I am on vacation. In my opinion everybody should travel. But I can’t leave my work office
because I am thefinancial manager and work foreign trade
However I am happy that I can work at my office and also enjoy my vacation.
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