I really want to know if there are grammar mistakes in these sentences.
Gone are the days when individuals have no access to have enough food and always going hungry.Thanks to the science and technology,the quality of our life has improving dramatically.however,as our society develope fast,the environment pollution has been ensued. Yet no one could fail to notice the influence ,both the favoritable and unfavoritable,the science and technology bring to us.
On the one hand,it is science and technology that make our life rich and variable .On the other hand, much individuals are suffering the environment pollution,you may not imagine some individuals are eating the polluted food and drinking the polluted water when you are living a happy life with fresh food and clean water .
In my personal sense,our government should take some effective measures to solve those problems.perhaps the point now is not who should be blamed or punished,but the measures we can take to save our environment.As us citizen,we can save water or pick up waste paper for a recycle in our daily life.Only in this way can we live a better life.

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I really want to know if there are grammar mistakes in these sentences. 
Gone are the days when individuals have no access to have enough food and always going hungry.Thanks to the science and technology,the quality of our life has improving dramatically.however,as our society develope fast,the environment pollution has been ensued. Yet no one could fail to notice the influence ,both the favoritable and unfavoritable,the science and technology bring to us. 
On the one hand,it is science and technology that make our life rich and variable .On the other hand, much individuals are suffering the environment pollution,you may not imagine some individuals are eating the polluted food and drinking the polluted water when you are living a happy life with fresh food and clean water . 
In my personal sense,our government should take some effective measures to solve those problems.perhaps the point now is not who should be blamed or punished,but the measures we can take to save our environment.As us citizen,we can save water or pick up waste paper for a recycle in our daily life.Only in this way can we live a better life.

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A passage of this length is much better posted in the Notebook section.  That section has a number of marking tools which will make the corrections clearer for you.  This Answer section is better suited to single sentences and general questions about grammar and translation.

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