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could somebody correct the english grammar of this text? Diabetes is metabolic syndrome characterized by insulin resistance and intolerance, it is increasingly common and its evolution and complications can be fatal. The aim of this study was to analyze the effect of the aerobic exercise on the glycemic control, understand its benefits and the importance of a regular practice. It was realized by a literature review from online scientific papers and the search was based effect of the aerobic exercise on Diabetes Mellitus. It is concluded that physical activity is very important, because their physiology proves that the body makes better use of glucose, decreasing its complications and symptoms. Physical activity is most important in glycemic control of diabetic subjects in improving both glucose intolerance and insulin resistance, the aerobic exercise have been emphasized for a better use of glucose with insulin, and it have an significant role in transfer glucose into the cell, because it facilitates the passage.

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Hi. It is better to add this as a notebook entry for correction.
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-Unable to highlight my changes ....I made a few corrections to each sentence - Also you use "it is important because" redundantly so I tried to add a few alternate ways to say it - I believe some of the content got lost in the grammar ...I had a few questions about what exactly you were trying to convey Diabetes is a metabolic syndrome characterized by insulin resistance and intolerance. It is increasingly common and its evolution and complications can be fatal. The aim of this study was to analyze the effect of aerobic exercise on glycemic control and outline the significance of regular practice by understanding it's benefits. (It was realized by a scientific literature review from online scientific papers and the search was based effect of the aerobic exercise on Diabetes Mellitus.) ---what?? ----Maybe you mean -- "Based on the research conducted in numerous online scientific literature reviews, aerobic exercise strongly effects Diabetes Mellitus." ??? The studies emphasized that physical activity is important because it changes the physiology of the body by making better use of glucose and thereby decreasing the complications and symptoms of Diabetes Mellitus.? In diabetic subjects physical activity improves both glucose intolerance and insulin resistance. Aerobic exercise causes a better use of gluscose with insulin, and has a significant role in transferring tglucose into the cells because it facilitates the passage.

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