Please correct my answer .(can you help me to find mistake in my note)thanks！
(The right answer is)When Jeremy Hampden, who is greatly admired for his great sense of humour, was invited to make a speech at a wedding reception, he immediately agreed to do so. (This note is written by me--)when jeremy is greatly admired for his great sense of humour ,one of jeremy's friend asked him whom is invited to make a speech at wedding reception and he immediately agreeto do so.

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Please correct my answer .(can you help me to find mistake in my note)thanks！
(The right answer is)When Jeremy Hampden, who is greatly admired for his great sense of humour, was invited to make a speech at a wedding reception, he immediately agreed to do so.  (This note is written by me--)when jeremy is greatly admired for his great sense of humour ,one of jeremy's friend asked him whom is invited to make a speech at wedding reception and he immediately agreeto do so.

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I'll just explain a couple of things...

"When Jeremy is greatly admired for his great sense of humour..." - this means there are times when Jeremy is NOT admired for his sense of humour.

"...one of Jeremy's friendS" - you need a group to have "one of".

"whom" doesn't fit here at all. The only other note is that you really need to pay attention to past tense.  I'm not sure if you had to paraphrase the original sentence, or construct some sentences from a situation.

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