Hello ! Could you correct the mistakes in these parts of the essay, please?
1.In fact, reading has become my greatest passion. Additionally, books develop both my English and Russian languages skills. My favourite book which l have read in English is “Little Women”. Let me tell you about it more…
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6. Why I advise it to read: l’d like to give an advice to read this book, especially in original Firstly, it reflects characters from either positive or negative sides. It allows young generation to draw conclusions and correct own mistakes. Secondly, it teaches to cheer up simple things in difficult days. Thirdly, there are a lot of moments where a reader can not only think something over, but also laugh and smile…
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Hello! Could you correct the mistakes in these parts of my essay, please?
1. fact, reading has become my greatest passion. Additionally, books develop both
my English and Russian language skills. My favourite book which l have read in
English is “Little Women”. Let me tell you more about it… —————- 6. Why I advise you to read it: l’d like to advise you to read this book, especially in the original.
Firstly, it reflects both the positive and negative sides of the characters, which allows younger generations to draw conclusions and correct their own mistakes. Secondly, it teaches us to use simple things to cheer us up during difficult days. Thirdly, there are a lot of moments where a reader can not only think something over, but also laugh and
smile…
here are a few more options:
- Additionally, books develop my language skills in both English and Russian.
- 6. Why I recommend reading it:
- I’d like to recommend this book to you, especially the original.
In this case it’s correct to write “can not” separately, because the “can” connects to the next phrase - they can…also laugh and smile :)
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Hello ! Could you correct the mistakes in these parts of the essay, please?
1.In fact, reading has become my greatest passion. Additionally, books develop both my English and Russian languages skills. My favourite book in English is “Little Women”. Let me tell you a bit more about it
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6. Why I recommend it: l’d like to recommend this book, especially in the original. Firstly, it reflects characters from both positive or negative sides. It allows the young generation to draw conclusions and correct their mistakes. Secondly, it teaches one to be cheerful on difficult days. Thirdly, there are a lot of moments where a reader can not only think something over, but also laugh and smile…
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Hello ! Could you correct mistakes in these parts of an essay, please? 1.In
fact, reading has become my greatest passion. Additionally, books develop both
my English and Russian skills. My favourite book which l have read in
English is “Little Women”. Let me tell you about it more… —————- 6. Why I advise
it to read: l’d like to give a piece of advice to read this book, especially in original
Firstly, it reflects characters from either positive or negative sides. It
allows young generation to draw conclusions and correct own mistakes. Secondly,
it teaches to cheer up simple things in difficult days. Thirdly, there are a lot
of moments in which a reader cannot only think something over, but also laugh and
smile…
My English is only B2, so I’m not sure with many things, but “cannot” we write as one word. And the word “Advice” is uncountable. we say a piece of advice (not 'an advice') and some advice (not 'some advices').
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