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Statistics analysis This graph illustrates the percentages of people aged 65 and over from 1940 to 2040 in Japan, Sweden, and the USA. In 1940, the USA had the largest proportion of old people among these countries, with 9.5%, which was about 2 times that of Japan. meanwhile, Sweden 's figure took the middle place, at 7.5%. This period from 1940 to 2015, the percentages of the population aged 65 and over in Sweden and the USA experienced gradual increasing trends, reaching the levels of 20% and 14% by 2019, respectively. At the same time, Japan's figure slightly decreased to 3% in 1985 before bouncing back to 6% in 2019. During 2019 to 2040, the figure of Japan is predicted to rise rapidly, with bypassing the USA in 2030 at 18% and overtaking Sweden at 22% in 2032, ultimately increasing to 27.5% in 2040. Meanwhile, the figures of other countries will show rising trends, with growing soomthly in Sweden at 2040, while the figure of the USA will rise to 22.5% by 2040. Overall, the proportion of elderly people aged 65 years and above increased in all three countries after 1940

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Statistics analysis

This graph illustrates the percentages of people aged 65 and over from 1940 to 2040 in Japan, Sweden, and the USA. 
In 1940, the USA had the largest proportion (这里为什么突然用proportion而不是percentage?虽然在某一个程度是可以理解,不过一般来说"proportion"  用来对比正常跟非正常的数据或者东西。eg. This man's feet were not proportional to his body, they were very large. ) of old people among these countries, with at 9.5% which was about 2 times that of Japan. Meanwhile, Sweden's figure took the middle second (排名的时候不会说"middle place") place at 7.5% (这句话不用那么多逗号).


During the this period from 1940 to 2015, the percentages of the population aged 65 and over in Sweden and the USA experienced gradual increases over time  trends, reaching the levels of (这是多余的删掉了) 20% and 14% respectively by 2019 respectively (respectively 造句最好加在两个形容词后面). At the same time, Japan's figure slightly decreased to 3% in 1985 before bouncing back to 6% in 2019.


During 2019 to 2040, the figure of Japan's figure is predicted to rise rapidly, with bypassing surpassing the USA in 2030 at 18% and overtaking Sweden at 22% in 2032, ultimately increasing to 27.5% in 2040. Meanwhile, the figures of other countries will (虽然指的是未来,但是实际上是指面前的图表,不应该用未来的时态) show smooth rising trends, with growing soomthly growth continuing in Sweden at 2040 while the figure of for the USA will rises (保持一个时态) to 22.5% by 2040.


Overall, the proportion percentage of elderly people aged 65 years and above increased in all three countries after 1940 (这句话没完全正确。increased after 1940 是指1940只有增长,但是日本明显有一段下落的部分,所以必须要说清楚"...in all three countries when comparing their respective percentages between 2040 and 1940. )

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Statistics analysis

This graph illustrates the percentages of people aged 65 and over from 1940 to 2040 in Japan, Sweden, and the USA.


In 1940, the USA had the largest proportion of old people among these countries, at 9.5%, which was about 2 times that of Japan. meanwhile, Sweden's figure took the middle place, at 7.5%.


During the period from 1940 to 2015, the percentages of the population aged 65 and over in Sweden and the USA experienced gradual increase, reaching the levels of 20% and 14% by 2019, respectively. At the same time, Japan's figure slightly decreased to 3% in 1985 before bouncing back to 6% in 2019.


During 2019 to 2040, Japan's figure is predicted to rise rapidly, with surpassing the USA in 2030 at 18% and overtaking Sweden at 22% in 2032, ultimately increasing to 27.5% in 2040. Meanwhile, the figures of other countries will show rising trends, with growing smoothly in Sweden at 2040, while the figure for the USA will rise to 22.5% by 2040.


Overall, the proportion of elderly people aged 65 years and above increased in all three countries since 1940.

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