can you corrrect my completely writing: benefits of social media
Social media has increasingly developed ang became part of without in our day life. It can not be denied that many benefits of social networks. The greatest advantage is connecting to family and friends living among different countries. For instance, it is easy for people talk with each other through Facebook messenger, Zalo, Viber ,…don’t waste any charge. Another benefits is searching information what we would like. Moreover , it is used for entertainment, such as read news, listen to music and watch movie. For example, thank to social networks, we can relax after nerve-racking from our work. In short, I have every reason to believe social media is tool help people convenient during time use them.
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can you correct my completely writing: benefits of social media
Social media has increasingly developed and became a part we can't do without in our daily life. It can not be denied that social networks have many benefits. The greatest advantage is connecting to family and friends living in different countries. For instance, it is easy for people to talk with each other through Facebook messenger, Zalo, Viber, as these companies do not charge you. Another benefit is searching for information that we like. Moreover, it is used for entertainment, such as reading news, listening to music and watching movies. For example, thanks to social networks, we can relax after a nerve-racking day* at our work. In short, I have every reason to believe social media is a tool to help people in a convenient way.*nerve-racking is used to describe something as an adjective so it needs a noun to go with it in most cases.
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