Family trip to Bali
Last three weeks, me and family travelled to Bali, this is our second family trip. We organized this trip due to both of my brothers’ Colleague hold a wedding party at Bali, and my brothers have been invited to be their colleague’s groomsman.
We rented a car to travel around Bali. We also hired a driver to fetch me and my parents to travel around in the second day, when both of my brothers went to the wedding party.
We have a great time at Bali and this is good to built up a good relationship with family members.
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Family trip to Bali
Three weeks ago, my family and I (1) travelled to Bali, this was our second family trip. We organized this trip to attend my brothers’ colleague's wedding party there, and my brothers had been invited to be their colleague’s groomsmen.
We rented a car to travel around Bali. We also hired a driver to take me and my parents around in the second day, when both of my brothers went to the wedding party.
We had a great time in Bali and this was a good opportunity to build up a good relationship with family members.
(1) In this sort of situation, try the two subjects with the verb, i.e. me travelled to Bali (not quite right, 'I' is better) and family travelled to Bali (also not quite right, 'my family' is better). When you're referring to something that you belong to or that belongs to you, plus yourself, you always put that object before you in the sentence, like 'my husband and I' or 'my family and I'. Complicated business, this English...
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