这是我的第一启
大家好！ 我叫Razilya。我二十六岁了。 我来自俄国。我住在Bashkortostan。我在工作MFC公司。我会英语。我学习汉语。汉语是很难语为了我。但是 我喜欢中文。我也喜欢看书，看电影，听音乐， 做朋友。我喜欢多文 。我想去汉国。
Hi everyone! I'm Razilya. I'm 26. I'm from Russia. I live in Bashkortostan. I work for MFC company. I know English. I learn Chinese. Chinese language is very difficuld for me. But I like Chinese. I also like reading books, watching movies, listening to music, making friends. I like a lot of languages. I want to go ot China.
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这是我的第一启封信（？）
大家好！ 我叫Razilya。我二十六岁了。 我来自俄国(actuallly it is commonly used)。我住在Bashkortostan。我在工作MFC公司工作。我会英语。我学习汉语。汉语是很难的语言，为了对我来说。但是 ，我喜欢中文。我也喜欢看书，看电影，听音乐， 做交朋友。我喜欢很多文语言 。我想去汉国中国。
Hi everyone! I'm Razilya. I'm 26. I'm from Russia. I live in Bashkortostan. I work for MFC company. I know English. I learn Chinese. Chinese language is very difficuld for me. But I like Chinese. I also like reading books, watching movies, listening to music, making friends. I like a lot of languages. I want to go ot China.
写得很好！用了太多的“我”，但是表达很简明。
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这是我的第一启次写作
大家好！ 我叫Razilya。我二十六岁了。 我来自俄罗斯（俄国：是旧的名称）。我住在Bashkortostan。我在工作MFC公司工作。我会英语。我学习汉语。汉语对我来说是很难的语言为了我。但是， 我喜欢中文。我也喜欢看书，看电影，听音乐， 做交朋友。我喜欢多种语言文 。我想去汉中国。Hi everyone! I'm Razilya. I'm 26. I'm from Russia. I live in Bashkortostan. I work for MFC company. I know English. I learn Chinese. Chinese language is very difficuld for me. But I like Chinese. I also like reading books, watching movies, listening to music, making friends. I like a lot of languages. I want to go ot China.
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